Use some stronger shading and lighting in areas, intensify the center point of your lighting. Also, your shadow is misplaced, it should be on the other side of the body. You can see where the light source is coming from from the lighting on his jawline, yet the shadow portrays it coming from the opposite side.
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I really like the scratches on the eye, and the entire facial structure is pretty good, I'd love to see you draw a frontal view.
Good work, glad I'm finally starting to see more than doodles from you lol.
That’s fantastic artwork! I’m glad anime encourages people to develop their talents and seek more. I hope you continue drawing now, too, because you are definitely talented and have everything to become an artist.
Unfortunately, I’m not that good at drawing and prefer not to waste time on something I cannot do right. That’s why I prefer ordering artwork from places like https://www.photolamus.com/couple-caricаtures. This way, I can be sure I will get something good.
I’m much better at taking pictures than drawing, and I consider it to be my main talent.